Agent Laura Crockett from TriadaUS Lit on editing clients, Jane Eyre, and Accents.

by Lisa Gail Green

Laura recently graduated with her M.A. in Publishing from Rosemont College in Philadelphia, where her graduate thesis won top awards for its spotlight on YA Gothic literature and its nineteenth-century influences. She’s worked as a writing tutor and freelance editor, blogs for Quirk Books, and runs her own book reviews blog Scribbles & Wanderlust. When she’s not agenting with TriadaUS Literary Agency, she’s selling books at Barnes & Noble, singing in choirs, and watching British television dramas with her fluffy black kitty Rossetti. You can find Laura on Twitter.

Welcome, Laura! What are some of your favorite authors/books and why do you love them?

Hands down, Jane Eyre is my all-time favorite book ever ever ever. I see myself in Jane, this outwardly calm and reasonable person with so much emotional undercurrent, with such passion and belief and devotion. She’s independent and seeks to find herself and her place in this world, but also wants nothing more than to be loved and accepted. I could go on for days, so for current (and YA) books and authors…

Rainbow Rowell, Gayle Forman, and Stephanie Perkins top my contemporary fiction list. They have the right writing style and voice for the teenager here-and-now. I’ll lay down money for every single one of their books. CJ Redwine, Juliet Marillier, and Carol Goodman top my fantasy list — all set in various times and places, but each have amazing young women in them. Their work is subtle and underrepresented, and worth every word and minute of your time. And finally, Harry Potter. Harry Potter changed my life.

Are you an editorial agent?

Yes, very. When I’m reading a manuscript, I’m reading it with three hats: as an agent (does this have an audience/market?), as an editor (what are things I’d change to make this even better?), and as a reader (hold up, that character did WHAT?! What happens next?!). When I’ve signed with an author, I go back to the manuscript and meticulously edit punctuation, grammar, structure, etc. But great manuscripts rarely need such attention to detail. I may have more general questions to ask the author and suggest they change. The manuscript that sells is the manuscript that needs as little editing as possible. I’m very hands-on, and if I’m left with my pen/mouse hanging in the air, then the manuscript is polished and ready for the world.

Coffee, tea, wine, chocolate, or any other vices?

Tea. Popcorn. Pork roast. BBC dramas. English, Irish, and Scottish accents.

Lisa Gail Green

Lisa Gail Green lives with her husband the rocket scientist and their three junior mad scientists in Southern California. She writes books so she can have an excuse to live in the fantasy world in her head. She likes to share these with readers. She has a parrot but would most definitely get a werewolf for a pet if she weren't allergic.

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Posted: Nov 6, 2014

Category: Imported from AYAP

Tags: Literary Agents | What Agents Want

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The Heart of your story is the main character. The protagonist is the beating core that truly brings your story to life. If your MC doesn't make kids (and their grown-ups) care within the first few pages, your story will flatline. </p>
<p>Your main character needs to be:<br />
• Relatable enough for kids to see themselves<br />
• Unique enough to stand out in the slush pile<br />
• Active enough to drive the story<br />
• Memorable enough to survive multiple readings at bedtime</p>
<p>Where do you find this amazing donor heart? It might be the very thing you loved so much about the manuscript you want to revive. It might be the younger sister from your shelved YA novel. Or maybe it’s the hilarious kid you blogged about meeting at a school visit. Find a character beating with potential and place it in the center of your story.<br />

The Brain of your story is the theme or central message. The theme is the big idea that controls everything else. Picture books are more than stories - they're tiny life lessons disguised with humor and heart.</p>
<p>But your theme needs to be:<br />
• Subtle enough not to trigger the dreaded "didactic" rejection<br />
• Clear enough for a four-year-old to grasp<br />
• Universal enough to speak to both kids and adults<br />
• Fresh enough to prevent agents and editors from responding with "Not another sharing/bedtime/first-day story!"</p>
<p>Check your other dead manuscripts to see if there is a recurring theme, something that really seems to be speaking to you. Find the bit of poetry you scribbled on the back of a receipt to see what theme inspired it. Reread the pep talk you texted your critique partner at 1am. Pick the theme that will drive your story, giving it purpose, direction, and deeper meaning.<br />

The Legs of your story is the plot. Not to be confused with a grave plot.🤪 The plot is what keeps everything upright and moving, as well as providing support for all the other elements. You have very few words to use in a picture book, so you need to do a lot with each plot point.</p>
<p>In general, your plot should:<br />
• Hook readers fast<br />
• Build tension that a child can follow<br />
• Create page turns that feel natural<br />
• Wrap up in a way that satisfies</p>
<p>You can borrow a plot twist (a leg) from one manuscript and the opening (the other leg) from a different manuscript. Consider if the subplot of the middle grade novel you trunked would work better as a picture book. Or maybe your Facebook post about a disastrous camping trip could become a story for kids. Just keep putting one foot in front of the other until you have your storyline.

The Arms of your story are the side characters.

The Torso of your story is the setting. Setting helps a story breathe and connects all the elements of the story. It isn't just where your story lives, it's what makes your story ALIVE. It's the difference between "this happened in a park" and "this happened in that park, the one with the twisty slide that burns your legs and the creaky swing that sounds like a baby crying.”</p>
<p>Your setting should:<br />
• Make your character's world feel real<br />
• Contain your story in a way that makes sense to young readers<br />
• Connect different scenes and moments organically<br />
• Give your illustrator enough room to add visual subplots</p>
<p>Half-finished manuscripts are a great place to dig up settings, since you worked out the place details before the plot petered out. Or maybe you had to cut a second fantastic location from your chapter book. You can also revisit the detailed caption from your Instagram carousel documenting your tour of that delish candy shop. Disinter a robust setting that can house all of your story's vital organs.

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