Marieke Nijkamp, author of BEFORE I LET GO, on ignoring all advice that doesn’t work for you

by Jocelyn Rish

Happy New Year! We’re excited to have Marieke Nijkamp here for our first interview of 2018!

Marieke, what did this book teach you about writing or about yourself?

That every book is different and that’s okay. The process of writing this book was intense and in a lot of ways, entirely different from writing TIWIE. Part of that was not just writing for myself anymore, but part of it was also writing an entirely different type of story. And that’s okay, as long as I show up and put the work in and, no matter how much it scares me, sit down and WRITE.

What advice would you most like to pass along to other writers?

Ignore all advice that doesn’t work for you, embrace what does. But on that spectrum, don’t be afraid to experiment. Don’t be scared to try to find what works for specific stories, either. Sometimes, what doesn’t work for one book, works wonders for the other, and vice versa.

What book or books would most resonate with readers who love your book–or visa versa?

I’ve been recommending Francesca Zappia’s ELIZA AND HER MONSTERS far and wide this past year; it’s one of my very favorite YAs. I also love, love, love Amy Rose Capetta’s ECHO AFTER ECHO. It’s queer, it’s theatry, and it’s full of murder. What more could you want? For 2018, I hope everyone has Mark Oshiro’s ANGER IS A GIFT on their radar. That book blew me away. It’s so necessary. So painful. So, so, so, so, so good. Speaking of 2018 debuts, can I also just say how much I’m looking forward to Candice Montgomery’s HOME AND AWAY? I love Cam’s writing and I cannot waaaaait to read this.

ABOUT THE BOOK

Before I Let Go
by Marieke Nijkamp
Hardcover
Sourcebooks Fire
Released 1/2/2018

Days before Corey is to return home to the snow and ice of Lost Creek, Alaska, to visit her best friend, Kyra dies. Corey is devastated and confused. The entire Lost community speaks in hushed tones about the town’s lost daughter, saying her death was meant to be. And they push Corey away like she’s a stranger.

Corey knows something is wrong. Lost is keeping secrets–chilling secrets. But piecing together the truth about what happened to her best friend may prove as difficult as lighting the sky in an Alaskan winter…

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Marieke Nijkamp a storyteller, dreamer, globe-trotter, geek. She’s the author of THIS IS WHERE IT ENDS and the forthcoming BEFORE I LET GO.

Her short stories can be found in: PILGRIM PLAYWRIGHT GENIE GUARD, FERAL YOUTH, and THE RADICAL ELEMENT.

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Have you had a chance to read BEFORE I LET GO yet? Do you ever change up your writing habits to get “unstuck”? If so, what worked best? Share your thoughts about the interview in the comments!

Happy Reading,

Charlotte, Jocelyn, Halli, Martina, Anisaa, Erin, Susan, Shelly, Kelly, Laura, Emily, and Lori Ann

Jocelyn Rish

Jocelyn Rish is a writer and filmmaker who loves researching weird and wonderful animals and sharing what she learns. Her debut was BATTLE OF THE BUTTS, about ten animals that do weird things with their butts. Her latest book is BATTLE OF THE BRAINS, a Junior Library Guild Gold Standard Selection about ten animals with mind-blowing brain abilities. When she’s not writing, she tutors kids to help them discover the magic of reading. Jocelyn has won numerous awards for her short stories, screenplays, films, and novels and lives in South Carolina with her adorable dog. Find out more at www.jocelynrish.com.

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Posted: Jan 2, 2018

Category: Imported from AYAP

Tags: YA Author Interviews

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The Heart of your story is the main character. The protagonist is the beating core that truly brings your story to life. If your MC doesn't make kids (and their grown-ups) care within the first few pages, your story will flatline. </p>
<p>Your main character needs to be:<br />
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The Brain of your story is the theme or central message. The theme is the big idea that controls everything else. Picture books are more than stories - they're tiny life lessons disguised with humor and heart.</p>
<p>But your theme needs to be:<br />
• Subtle enough not to trigger the dreaded "didactic" rejection<br />
• Clear enough for a four-year-old to grasp<br />
• Universal enough to speak to both kids and adults<br />
• Fresh enough to prevent agents and editors from responding with "Not another sharing/bedtime/first-day story!"</p>
<p>Check your other dead manuscripts to see if there is a recurring theme, something that really seems to be speaking to you. Find the bit of poetry you scribbled on the back of a receipt to see what theme inspired it. Reread the pep talk you texted your critique partner at 1am. Pick the theme that will drive your story, giving it purpose, direction, and deeper meaning.<br />

The Legs of your story is the plot. Not to be confused with a grave plot.🤪 The plot is what keeps everything upright and moving, as well as providing support for all the other elements. You have very few words to use in a picture book, so you need to do a lot with each plot point.</p>
<p>In general, your plot should:<br />
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• Build tension that a child can follow<br />
• Create page turns that feel natural<br />
• Wrap up in a way that satisfies</p>
<p>You can borrow a plot twist (a leg) from one manuscript and the opening (the other leg) from a different manuscript. Consider if the subplot of the middle grade novel you trunked would work better as a picture book. Or maybe your Facebook post about a disastrous camping trip could become a story for kids. Just keep putting one foot in front of the other until you have your storyline.

The Arms of your story are the side characters.

The Torso of your story is the setting. Setting helps a story breathe and connects all the elements of the story. It isn't just where your story lives, it's what makes your story ALIVE. It's the difference between "this happened in a park" and "this happened in that park, the one with the twisty slide that burns your legs and the creaky swing that sounds like a baby crying.”</p>
<p>Your setting should:<br />
• Make your character's world feel real<br />
• Contain your story in a way that makes sense to young readers<br />
• Connect different scenes and moments organically<br />
• Give your illustrator enough room to add visual subplots</p>
<p>Half-finished manuscripts are a great place to dig up settings, since you worked out the place details before the plot petered out. Or maybe you had to cut a second fantastic location from your chapter book. You can also revisit the detailed caption from your Instagram carousel documenting your tour of that delish candy shop. Disinter a robust setting that can house all of your story's vital organs.

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